Oh yes, I see... thank you<a class="mention" href="/@ricreate">@ricreate</a>... ah, maybe just remove the "a", the meaning changes ever so slightly... (plus add missing comma, haha)
In battle of wills
Fight for freedom, not control
Free to be heart-whole
Other option is to use plural, "battles"... but somehow doesn't ring right, interesting challenge
Oh yes, I see... thank you<a class="mention" href="/@ricreate">@ricreate</a>... ah, maybe just remove the "a", the meaning changes ever so slightly... (plus add missing comma, haha)
In battle of wills
Fight for freedom, not control
Free to be heart-whole
Other option is to use plural, "battles"... but somehow doesn't ring right, interesting challenge